Daenerys Targaryen - Blood and Fire

I decided to go for quite a cartoonish style cause I didnt really get much time to finish it and making all the shades as real as i wish there were would take long nights of my life.
It's H, HB, 4B and 6B + automatic pencil 2B on A4 and my aim was to achieve a little bit of 'silver' impression but everything looks like a blur instead, I think the contrast is too weak.